Talk:Drag Isn't Dangerous/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: GnocchiFan (talk · contribs) 21:20, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- "Background" section did not have the official name of the act, or when it went into place, so I've added that information now: [1] [2]. Could possibly mention how this anti-drag law is part of a longstanding anti-LGBT trope of drag queens being sexual predators of children IMO, but I'm aware this is not the main subject of the article (and the main article doesn't go into excessive detail on this) so ambivalent on this.
"Timeline" in subsection could probably be integrated into article prose as opposed to bulleted list, with a little expansion, but not fussed either way.
- "Background" section did not have the official name of the act, or when it went into place, so I've added that information now: [1] [2]. Could possibly mention how this anti-drag law is part of a longstanding anti-LGBT trope of drag queens being sexual predators of children IMO, but I'm aware this is not the main subject of the article (and the main article doesn't go into excessive detail on this) so ambivalent on this.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Could do with more images if possible, but the promotional poster looks good for now.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
- Overall: Overall good to go!
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comment: Thank you very much @GnocchiFan! My freaking first good article! 🤩 Thank you and I really freaking appreciated it! — JuanGLP (talk/contribs) 22:34, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
- No worries, keep up the good work! 😃 GnocchiFan (talk) 08:14, 5 January 2024 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.